Everybody should be allowed admission to university study programs regardless of their level of academic ability. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In today's competitive world where we live, education is one of the important factors for the prosperity of people. There is a controversial belief that everyone should be allowed enrollment in university programs no matter their academic ability level. Even though many people support
this
concept, I totally disagree with Linking Words
this
argument as it may lead to several negative consequences for individuals Linking Words
such
as moral problems and wasting precious time.
Nobody can deny that not everyone is capable of absorbing academic knowledge. If the person has passion and devotion to certain kinds of subjects Linking Words
such
as Math, Science or English, it is remarkably easy to obtain them. Linking Words
However
, there are some individuals who have less enthusiasm for Linking Words
such
subjects which might delay their learning process for longer weeks, months or even years. Linking Words
As a result
, a considerable amount of their time could be wasted and Linking Words
this
would be used wisely in learning other skills like Linking Words
handicraft
, gardening or cooking. Fix the agreement mistake
handicrafts
For
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this
reason, it is highly advisable for applicants to think deeply and figure out which field they are really interested in before applying for university degrees.
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Furthermore
, unfortunately, these days many parents force their offspring to follow in their footsteps regardless they are incapable Linking Words
to achieve
excellent academic performances. In these cases, students put their all effort into learning the academic subjects in order to make their parents happy but they may fail in many circumstances, resulting in more serious challenges Change preposition
of achieving
such
as hopelessness, depression or even suicide. Linking Words
In contrast
, if they do their all efforts Linking Words
in
other activities like dancing, singing or painting for which they have an excessive passion, they Change preposition
into
would
reach the zenith of their career ladder. Wrong verb form
will
Thus
, the more interest and passion the young generation has for certain kinds of fields, the more they could be successful in building their future careers in these areas.
In conclusion, having considered all, Linking Words
although
many people claim the importance of allowing all applicants to be enrolled in academic programs Linking Words
of
university Change preposition
apply
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nevertheless
the level of their academic capability, I disagree with Rephrase
regardless of
this
opinion because it may cause some Linking Words
further
serious problems for them in terms of psychology and time management.Linking Words
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