Many animals today are being hunted to the point of extinction. What can be done to tackle this problem?
Since
,
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animals
have become a vital creatures
in our ecosystem. Correct the article-noun agreement
a vital creature
vital creatures
However
, the most critical issue is now going on. That is
faunas
have hunted
enormously by Add a missing verb
been hunted
humans
in day
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the day
today
. while Correct your spelling
to day
as a result
, it paves the way to eradicate wild animals
. In
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This
this
essay focus on what are the problems for
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of
this
extinction in faunas
and solutions to mitigate these issues from our globe.
To begin
with, one of the first
problem
is wherever Change to a plural noun
problems
animals
are used to manufacture various types of products by humans
for business purposes. Also
, those people
conversately
try to use Correct your spelling
conversely
that specific
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that specific animal
those specific animals
animals
and consequently
, those faunas
have become endangered in
alarming rates. Change preposition
at
In addition
, medicines, ornaments, traditional
statues are produced by using Correct word choice
and traditional
animals
. For example
, Indochina Tigers were extinct before
a decade of Change preposition
for
period
because Add an article
the period
people
were engaged on
hunting tigers. These animal's Change preposition
in
bone
and skin Fix the agreement mistake
bones
used
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are used
for
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to
create
medicines and clothes for enormously by business traders. Change the verb form
creating
Therefore
, faunas
have become endangered especially, because of humans
detrimental activities and selfish reasons.
A possible Change noun form
humans'
human's
solutions
to Correct the article-noun agreement
solution
these problem
is to implement rules and regulations witha Change the determiner
this problem
these problems
effective
and efficient way Correct article usage
an effective
among
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within
community
. Add an article
the community
Moreover
, whenever, governments should be want to propose plans and schemes to reduce extinction
of Correct article usage
the extinction
animals
in our environment. For example
, In2000, Correct article usage
the Nigeria
Nigeria
government Replace the word
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had
reduced Unnecessary verb
apply
hunting
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the hunting
wildlife
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of wildlife
animals
rate by owning 1000$ of
penalty from hunters. Change preposition
apply
Additionally
, responsible sectors can organise awareness programmes and educateto
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educate
people
about significance
of Add an article
the significance
faunas
.
In conclusion, animals
are become endangered due to humans
violations and to Change the noun form
human
fulfil
their needs and requirements. If Wrong verb form
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people
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are concern
concern
about these natural creatures by themselves, Wrong verb form
concerned
definetely
we would Correct your spelling
definitely
able
to mitigate Add a missing verb
be able
this
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