Many animals today are being hunted to the point of extinction. What can be done to tackle this problem?

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animals
have become
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in our ecosystem.
However
, the most critical issue is now going on.
That is
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enormously by
humans
in
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. while
as a result
, it paves the way to eradicate wild
animals
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essay focus on what are the problems
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extinction in
faunas
and solutions to mitigate these issues from our globe.
To begin
with, one of the
first
problem
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is wherever
animals
are used to manufacture various types of products by
humans
for business purposes.
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, those
people
conversately
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conversely
try to use
that specific
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animals
and
consequently
, those
faunas
have become endangered
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alarming rates.
In addition
, medicines, ornaments,
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statues are produced by using
animals
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For example
, Indochina Tigers were extinct
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a decade of
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because
people
were engaged
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hunting tigers. These animal's
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and skin
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for
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create
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medicines and clothes for enormously by business traders.
Therefore
,
faunas
have become endangered especially, because of
humans
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detrimental activities and selfish reasons. A possible
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to
these problem
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is to implement rules and regulations witha
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and efficient way
among
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community
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.
Moreover
, whenever, governments should be want to propose plans and schemes to reduce
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of
animals
in our environment.
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, In2000,
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the Nigeria
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Nigeria
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government
had
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reduced
hunting
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wildlife
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animals
rate by owning 1000$
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penalty from hunters.
Additionally
, responsible sectors can organise awareness programmes and
educateto
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educate
people
about
significance
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the significance
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of
faunas
. In conclusion,
animals
are become endangered due to
humans
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violations and to
fulfil
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their needs and requirements. If
people
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concern
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about these natural creatures by themselves,
definetely
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definitely
we would
able
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be able
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to mitigate
this
problem.
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