Many animals today are being hunted to the point of extinction. What can be done to tackle this problem?

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animals have become

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in our ecosystem.

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enormously by population

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day today. while

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.

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essay focus on what are the problems

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extinction in faunas and solutions to mitigate these issues from our globe.

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is wherever they are used to manufacture various types of products by

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for business purposes.

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conversately

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and

consequently

, those faunas have become endangered

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alarming rates.

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statues are produced by using

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.

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were engaged

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hunting tigers. These animal's

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and skin

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for

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create

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medicines and clothes for enormously by business traders.

Therefore

, beasts have become endangered especially, because of

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detrimental activities and selfish reasons. A possible

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to

these problem

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is to implement rules and regulations witha

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and efficient way

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community

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.

Moreover

, whenever, governments should be want to propose plans and schemes to reduce

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of living beings in our environment.

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Nigeria

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government

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reduced

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wildlife beast

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by owning 1000$

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penalty from hunters.

Additionally

, responsible sectors can organise awareness programmes and educate

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about

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of

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. In conclusion, living creatures are become endangered due to

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violations and to

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their needs and requirements. If

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concern

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about these natural Livingston by themselves,

definetely

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we would

able

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to mitigate

this

problem.