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Some people claim that not enough waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their wastes

#people #waste #homes #governments #requirement #laws #wastes
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Garbage
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 recycling is one of the important
problem
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 in society. Many
people
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 state that not enough rubbish from houses is turned over.
Individuals
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 think that the authorities can improve the recycling process using the
law
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 so it will be a mandatory requirement. I acknowledge the idea that the government can use the
law
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 to increase community awareness to do
waste
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 recycling. Many commuters believe that there is a lot of
garbage
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particularly
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home
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waste
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that is
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 not recycled yet.
That is
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 owing to many facts in the environment that some
garbage
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 is thrown away in
differrent
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different
 locations without any responsibility.
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, a small number of
people
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 understand the use of modern landscapes for
waste
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 recycling so the usage of
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 landscapes is still limited.
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, in several areas in Jakarta, there are many places that become the storage of homes
garbage
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 without any rules and they become the source of diseases as well as bad odour due to unprocessed
waste
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.
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, society claims that the recycling process is not enough yet to implement in
people
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's daily life. Considering the previous facts,
individuals
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 believe that using the
law
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 will be beneficial to
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people
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 more responsible for recycling
home
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 wastes.
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 because communities tend to be afraid of the
law
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 and consequences so
people
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 will try to follow the rules without any exception.
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, using the
law
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 and maybe fines will make
individuals
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 try to process and maintain their
home
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wastes
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waste
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 as
people
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 do not want to pay the fines. One simple example is in a nation
such
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 as Singapore,
people
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 have to pay fines if they throw away the
garbage
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 in inappropriate places so Singapore
people
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 are very disciplined in the
garbage
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 business.
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, integrating the
law
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 into
home
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wastes
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waste
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 recycling may improve
people
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's awareness regarding their
waste
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 processions as well as the usage of the modern
waste
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 landscape. To sum up,
waste
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 recycling is general society homework and
individuals
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 have to work together to solve it.
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, I agree that the
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 particularly related to
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 procession may play important role in increasing
people
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's willingness to recycle their own
waste
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 products.
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