These days some people argue that food should be locally produced and consumed instead of transporting it from fileds to markets. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the
contemperory
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contemporary
society,
people
anywhere around the world are needy
of
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for
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good and fresh
food
items
. Recently, a school of thought believe that locally
growing
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food
items
is
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are
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better
to
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for
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consumed
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consume
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by
the
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ordinary
people
more
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than that
of
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marketing. In my opinion,I strongly
disgree
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disagree
with
this
statement and in
this
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I explain the
sorrounding
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surrounding
reasons with examples. There are
Plethora
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a Plethora
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of reasons
to
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for
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my
disagreent
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disagreement
of the statement . In the
arlier
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earlier
time
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individual started agriculture for the existence of
thier
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their
life and
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to fulfill
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fulfill
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fulfil
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their daily need
of
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for
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food
. But
noiw
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now
, the society changed a lot .
Firstly
, most
of
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the
agragarian
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agrarian
country like
Indias
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India's
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economy is widely
depending
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dependent
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on
production
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the production
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and marketing of
food
items
.
Moreover
, it helps to increase the national income of
trhe
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the
country
also
.
For example
, according to the records of
statistical
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the statistical
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department of India, it shows that the leading producer of wheat in India is Punjab and rice is in
state
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the state
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of
AndhraPradesh
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Andhra Pradesh
. So, the marketing of
production
helps to sell the
items
locally and internationally and it
tend
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tends
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to develop the
nations
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nation's
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economic growth.
Secondly
, most
of
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the
people
are interested to do
white collar
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jobs and some other professions.
Therefore
, it is not possible to
growing
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grow
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food
items
locally.
Furthermore
, not only the
people
in cityside but
also
the consumers of locally produced
farmers
.
However
,
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these
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there
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plenty of local
production
of grains and vegetables together make most of the
countries
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country's
countries'
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agragarian
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agrarian
market
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markets
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a profitable
one
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apply
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too.
Finally
, the individuals in town and city have limited space to live and they are
depending
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the local
farmers
and
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apply
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at the same
time
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the ordinary
producers
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producer's
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main source of income is the marketing of produced
items
to the local markets and other national markets.
For instance
, the
farmers
in
kerala
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Kerala
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producing seasonal vegetables and getting high
yield
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yields
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and
sells
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selling
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to the countryside and other states help them to make
better
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a better
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profit in 2021 than
2020
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in 2020
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reported by Agriculture magazine. To conclude,
production
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the production
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and distribution of
food
items
locally and widely help
farmers
and
economy
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the economy
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to
a
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apply
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better growth and development. And it is consumed by the local
people
itself did not bring any use to the
farmers
and affects to the
countrys
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country
country's
market too.
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