Your friend recently moved to the same town where you live. Please write a letter to invite your friend to go to the gym together. In your letter o describe why you go to this gym o say what part of this gym you recommend o explain why you think it is suitable for your friend

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Dear Narmada, I'm very happy to know that you are in Sherbrooke now.I'm writing

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letter to ask you if you can join me at the

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. Currently,I'm going to the Maxi Club ,

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is the best

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that I discovered in the city, after trying a couple of them.

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has numerous equipment with latest technologies, And

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they provide well experienced personal trainers. with an affordable price of $120 per year.I find it less expensive with the facilities they have. As I mentioned they assist with the trainers and the price is all included you do not have to pay anything extra for the personal assistance.The greatest part of

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would be the weekly sessions about the diet plans and nutrition recommendations that they provide in weekly seminars for all of their customers,

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it has a swimming pool which you can use in the summers. I strongly believe

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will be the best choice for you as well.Because I know you would love to go to the

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and be fit.

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always been looking for advanced equipment.It has all of them which meets up your requirement.

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, we both can go together and stay motivated.As you know I like spending time with you as we were doing in our college

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. I'll be waiting for your reply.See you soon. Shobha.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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221 words

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