You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
As we all might know, we are indeed producing lots of rubbish each day, there are many examples which might be useful to stop
this
trend, and I will discuss the reasons why it is happening in the first place and share some of my personal knowledge in this
essay which can be helpful to reduce rubbish.
Firstly
, most garbage comes from the products that we use and throw out in the dustbin , especially the packaging which is made up of mostly TPU. Every company try to showcase their item by using special packing which can be only made with plastic, for example
, if you look at the premium brands, their focus is mostly on the packing to make it look like the best quality, such
as mostly coffee brands sell their coffee in the premium plastic pack which looks expensive and show quality up to the mark. these things should be reduced to create less waste.
Secondly
, most of the garbage land in the rivers and oceans that are not recycled. In this
scenario, the government has to take part and create awareness among the public and put dustbins on every corner of the street, doing this
, can make a great impact on the people who throw such
things anywhere, there are many NGOs who are doing the cleanup in the sea, such
as blue Ocean, their main target is to clean up the rivers and ocean, the government should also
support these NGO's and help recycle every part of the garbage.
To conclude
, We all are responsible for every situation created, not just for any organisation, it is also
our responsibility to create less rubbish and recycle as much as we can so it never ends up in the ocean where it becomes more difficult to recycle, and government need to take action on the companies that use plastic material for packaging instead
of organic material.Submitted by MK on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
task achievement
Your essay addresses the task and provides a reasonable explanation for why we are producing more rubbish. However, your arguments could be more clearly structured. For example, consider separating your ideas into distinct paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
The essay should have a clear introduction, multiple body paragraphs, and a conclusion. This will help readers follow your arguments more easily. Use linking words and phrases to connect your sentences and paragraphs.
task achievement
You provide relevant examples, such as the packaging used by coffee brands and the cleanup efforts by NGOs like Blue Ocean.
coherence cohesion
You conclude the essay by restating the main points and offering actionable suggestions, which provides a sense of closure.
Fully explain your ideas
To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.