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Although there are a lot of translation software available, learning a language could still be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#translation #software #language
Learning
languages
 of the most important thing to improve personal skills. Even though there are many translation software that could work well to translate between
languages
 ,
however
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 the question is does the new
technology
 become better than humans depend on it? From my ,perspective I don'
t
 think agree with
technology
 because
language
 needs to explain our feelings and that you can'
t
 find it with machines. another reason many impacts to continue the
language
 like history and cultures behind the
languages
 .
To begin
 with,
language
 means feeling and thought translated to words, which mean, hance sound or writing it. For
an
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instant, sending messages with real meaning needs to the human explain more about it.
Moreover
, we can'
t
 take it seriously or guge any transit without checking from the human on what is written about to see the thing is right
On the other hand
,
Language
 contin history and culture from many years to use it generation after generation
also
 include other like thing accents to use.
Secondly
,
technology
 doesn'
t
 achieve that point we can say it's right to explain everything with the same meaning. for
an
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 I speak two
languages
 when I use google translate I found not the same meaning from Arabic to English or the opposite is true. To sum up , even though all the new
technology
 is developing in translation I think we don'
t
 achieve that point we can say we don'
t
 need to learn other
languages
 anymore. mabe in the future with long-term not in the
next
 decade.
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