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Many people these days have computer, laptops, telephones at their homes for work. Do you think, working from home has more advantages or disadvantages? Give reasons

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In
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 concurrent world, it is undoubtedly true that because of
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 pandemic social distance has increased and most
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 have been working from
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. Some
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 concur that it is safe.
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, I quibble with them and propound that
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 are not enjoying it.
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 elaborate on my reason for the same in upcoming paragraphs which will lead to a logical conclusion.  There is adequate evidence of
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 view which is substantial. The top-notch concrete reason is the wireless system at
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 which, most of them prefer doing at the place they are comfortable in their own place. Another pivotal aspect is the flexibility of the time, in day time if they want to do something for themselves at night they can do their job.
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 it is clear that working from
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 is preferred by most of them and has certainly undeniable merits. What is half full for some, may appear half empty to others. So,
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, in general, tend to distinguish that which has multifarious reasons. To commence with, some
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 deem that not going out for the whole day and staying in one place makes you frustrated and irritated which eventually leads to depression and anxiety. In ,addition they
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 uphold that justify that
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 are getting lazy as they do not have an any-time line to join work and do it they can do it any time. To culminate, I reiterate that there are plenty of strong factors supporting not doing their job from
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, the contrary cannot be overlooked either.
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