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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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There is no argument that learning a foreign
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 for
travel
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 or work is one of the most significant
reasons
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. Some
people
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 think that there are plenty of
reasons
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 to
study
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 a new
language
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. In the following paragraphs, both of these viewpoints will be discussed in detail before a conclusion is reached. It is true that some
people
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 learn a new
language
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 to
travel
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 and work in a foreign country. The reason is communication skills ,especially in a different country that we do not use to are very important.
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, if they can communicate with local society in that place with a different
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 that will be easier than using a translation.
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, even though the translation has developed a lot in the past few years, it is still defective and error for some time. So
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 the reason why everybody needs to have basic skills before going to an unfamiliar place.
However
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, other
people
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 think that
travel
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 and work are not the main
reasons
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 of
study
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 a
language
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.
People
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 learn a new foreign
language
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 for their own needs.
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,
study
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 that
language
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 because they are interested. Nowadays, in Thailand, many
people
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study
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 Korea to communicate with their superstars. Not only for idols but
also
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 for self-interest. Many
people
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 are interested in that
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 for themself so they motivate themself. Due to the new generation, I believe that learning from feelings of wanting to learn will be more successful than forcing yourself. In conclusion, it depends on
people
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 who
study
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 that learn for
travel
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 and job or for other
reasons
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. In the future,
language
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 will play an important role in our life.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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