Describe a time when a person said positive things about something you did.

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When it comes to

this

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topic, I’d like to share the video clip I edited as an editor, which was liked by my boss and the

producer

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. Well, in April 2016, I got a job

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a film crew. At that time we were working on a tv show called preacher, starring Dominic Cooper and Ruth Negga. They

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act in the 2016 movie called Warcraft, the beginning. The show Preacher was presented by AMC, if I remember correctly the fourth season was on air in 2019. Anyway, for the

first

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two

months

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I was organizing all the footage that my boss

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shot every week from the set. I don’t know; I think the set is in the middle of nowhere in Taxes or Arizona

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because most of the

scene

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happened in a place called black water, so it’s kind of, you know, west movie kind of

scene

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. After two months of hardworking, I edited some lineup for the

producer

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to see. So I got a chance to edit the Behind

scene

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for the

last

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episode, calling god or something. Because I was the assistant editor at

first

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. So, it is really a great

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to get

this

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opportunity. So, for a week, I worked 12 hours a day and

finally

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presented a

well organized

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piece to the

producer

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. My boss and

producer

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were so satisfied with the version, so basically there was no feedback about the piece. And among the 10 behinds the

scene

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shorts, mine was the only one without

reediting

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, and you know, as usual, the BTS will always

added

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add

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some clip from the TV show, to cover some mistakes, to add some thrill element, because you know, the Tv shows

comes

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with all the special effects visual effects all kinds of fancy stuff, but mine, only use the B roll from the set and

done

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the job perfectly.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

313 words

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Describe a time when a person said positive things about something you did.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others,however,say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Rich countries should not employ skilled labour from poor countries, as poor countries need the worker more. To what extent do you agree or disagree.