In many parts of the world, there is continuous coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves. discuss both views and give your opinion.

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A highly controversial issue today relates to whether to have live games coverage or to play games. In
this
essay, I am going to examine
this
question from both points of view and
then
explain why I believe that
such
sports coverage reluctant youth to participate in sports or play and
thus
will lead to a logical conclusion. In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits. On balance,
however
, I feel that the government should encourage their dwellers to regular exercise or do sports on a routine basis.
This
is because it is crucial for their health and fitness level.
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