In many parts of the world, there is continuous coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves. discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, there are two perspectives some
people
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claim that the tv should not broadcast
sports
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events, and other
people
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say that television and other
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must cover
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,
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essay will check both views and I express my idea in the end. On the one hand, the progress of technology leads to we can see many events through of
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, we location it does not matter,
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, these technologies will cover almost everywhere around the world, as well as, some of the population who are interested in
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can understand the result of a competition to easily,
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, not only different kind of
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helping community who have fond of sport for increasing knowledge of different
sports
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but
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the
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encouraged the community for starting a sport for reaching a healthy life,
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, we may be suffered to a different type of illness,
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, the
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decided to improve our life through of many devices,
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, television and radio and satellite and something else, and I agree with
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topic that tv should covered
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.
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, there are some
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that disagree with
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subject, maybe for
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reason that
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leads to the anxiety of athletes but it is not a good reason, definitely,
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part of
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are very lower than before part. in conclusion,
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is good happened that the
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broadcasting via
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can support athletes, I completely agree with
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topic, and
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welfare can help
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that know athletes and support them.
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