Some people say that the experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future life. Others say that experiences as a teenager, especially at school, are more influential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

While some individuals underscore the importance of the preschool experiences in the adulthood stage, others advocate that attention should be put on their life as teenagers. Having said that, there are rational arguments on both sides of

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. On the one hand, the experiences that children go through during the

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years of their life are crucial as their brains and behaviour will be influenced by them. To put it another way, as an infant, they are gaining information about their surroundings which was not known before;

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knowledge will gradually shape their personality.

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, every single experience they have will affect their lives as an adult including abuse or sexual assault. Going through these kinds of things would definitely cause depression later on.

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to ,say children who have lived in a peaceful family will be more confident and will behave in a good way as they have learnt to be.

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, I personally believe that youngsters would be more influenced by their peers. Indeed,

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period is a milestone in their lives since it would be their

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experience in society and they will try to adapt to the circumstances. In fact, during

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stage they spend most of their time with their friends who are influenced by hormones as well as they are themselves.

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will influence the way they think and behave, and it would the possibility for them to join gangs as they are looking for excitement and want to have their peer’s attention.

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, parents have to mentor their loved ones during

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period as it will have a critical influence on their future lives. In conclusion, there are valid arguments on both sides of the controversy; on balance,

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it is my firm conviction that attention should be paid to the adolescents as they are under the influence of their friends and the society which would encourage misbehaviour.