The government's investment in arts, music and theater is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

The

governments

invest in many different social activities

such

as music, arts and theatre. Some people believe that these funds should be invested in public

services

by politicians. One of the biggest reasons is to grow up their citizens as

a cultural individuals

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.

On the other hand

, public

services

are really important to improve citizens' quality of life;

therefore

I partly agree with

this

statement because there are both advantages and disadvantages. Both of these viewpoints will be outlined in detail before concluding.

To begin

with, investing in social activities is caused by people who do not want to live a standard life. and

in addition

, many countries create inflation to pay the country borrows. and these artworks were never impacted by inflation.

Therefore

the

governments

who want to protect the value of money have to buy artworks or something(anything else) that has a limited supply.

For instance

, Mona Lisa sold out 20 million dollars ten years ago, but nowadays ıt is 100 million dollars maybe even more.

Although

some individuals believe that

this

is a waste of money, the government try to protect its citizens.

On the other hand

, some societies think that

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governments

should be invested these funds in public

services

rather than arts, music or theatre. Politicians can be developed not only bike lanes or streets and

also

support the homeless.

For example

,

governments

can build bus stations to ease human lives.

Thus

, the government can be touched many people's lives. To sum up, greater investment in public

services

would ease many congestions. but at the same ,time government policy may be beneficial to protect the country's economy.