The shortage of housing in big cities can cause severe consequences.Only government action can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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a huge

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and it is

lack

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of space for housing.So,

government

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the government

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can do some action to solve

this

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issue.In my

openion

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opinion

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government should be the

primery

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primary

actors

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in

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particular,individuals can be affected

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this

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problem

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with,

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should build tall

flat

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such

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tower

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that

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a lot of

people

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can live in

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this

place

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.

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,

governments

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should learn to citizens

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how they live in small houses and

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.So,they do not have

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problem

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when they have discipline.

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,

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can

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fascinate

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sette

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settle

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insted

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instead

of that they live in a house with a big yard.Despite the fact that

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people

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do not have complete freedom in these apartments.

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, they can not have

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a pet

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pet

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and they should not have

bigparty

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big party

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long time. I quite

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that,if

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have a balance on the population,they have not

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individuals should not have a lot of

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babies

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problem

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in the

feuture

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future

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they can live better than now because facilities

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very important for their lives.Despite the fact mentioned,

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are more effective than

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and when they have pressure from advertising they can change

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's opinions.For having

less

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children and

live

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in

the

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flat. To sum up,

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should provide more and more facilities for citizens

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they can live better than now and

i

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think if

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expand cities they can solve

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problem

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.

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people

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have

not

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no

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limits

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as

,

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they live

easoer

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easier

tham

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them

than

that

now.