Cohabitation is believed to bring huge advantages for young people since it enables them to fully understand each other before deciding to get married. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Lifestyle has changed a lot since the
modern day
. Many Add a hyphen
modern-day
people
are choosing to live as a real married couple before they get married. There is a belief that this
trend gives couples
plenty of benefits, especially fully understand
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understanding
between
each other. In my opinion, I agree with that statement.
I believe that fully understanding has an important role in building Change preposition
apply
the
relationship. In fact, Correct article usage
a
a
number of divorced Correct article usage
the
couples
are growing up dramatically nowadays. Cohabitation
is one of the new lifestyles that
developed by the youth to prevent it happens. In Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
lifestyle, a couple will live together as a real family. They will share the housework or even start to plan their family’s finances. Therefore
, some arguments which never happened before will occur now. Based on that kind of conversations
, the couple will be able to decide whether they were finding the right partner for their life, which is helping them to avoid divorce in the future.
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conversation
However
, there are still many people
disagree
Correct pronoun usage
who disagree
cohabitation
, especially Asian Change preposition
with cohabitation
people
. Because of the Asian culture, people
think that a woman should not live together with a man before they plan a wedding. In addition
, they also
think that women have to get married as soon as possible. It is very important for the
female to have a real family before they reach the age of thirty in Asia. Correct article usage
apply
Cohabitation
still
a hot topic and Add a missing verb
is still
Add a missing verb
is being
being
against in many countries in Asia Wrong verb form
is
such
as Vietnam and China.
In conclusion, I think cohabitation
is one of the modern lifestyles that people
should adopt it
because it can prevent Correct pronoun usage
apply
couples
from divorce
in the future. Divorcing is a big problem in the present. It will cause a big effect on children’s development. Love does not need to be ended up with a marriage relationship. I believe Wrong verb form
divorcing
couples
still have a happy life without having registration of marriage, but with the
fully Correct article usage
a
understand
between each other.Wrong verb form
understanding
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