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In many countries, people are woking increasingly longer hours. What are reasons for this? Is it a positive or a negative effect.

In today’s rapid and highly advanced society, spending the majority of our time working has become commonplace across the globe. I believe that the reasons for
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 trend can come down to(involve) two main aspects, economic and cultural impact, and the phenomenon of longer working
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 is certainly unsustainable and negative for both individuals and the entire society. Economic and cultural factors are the main reasons that drive
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 to do so.
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, as urbanization develops, more youngsters tend to take their chances in bigger cities where the living cost can be extremely high.
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, in order to meet their daily needs and wants, these
people
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 must
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 longer
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 to earn more money.
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, in some economically thriving countries, their societies have witnessed an ongoing trend of competitive culture in the
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 decade.
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 means that being busy has already become a unique lifestyle which helps
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 to feel confident and independent.
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, more and more Chinese young
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 are choosing to invest their time in
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instead
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 of social bonding to protect their personalities and more importantly, to become economically self-sufficient as well.
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, in my view, working increasingly longer
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, in the long run, can be totally terrible. For individuals, if they stay in a
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 or exhausting environment for a long time, chances are high that they
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 be caught up in some health problems, say insomnia or even worse, depression.
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,
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 a study conducted by scholars at Peking University, there are around a 100million
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 in China who are diagnosed with different levels of mental diseases, largely
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 pressure from
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.
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, if companies in society keep draining
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’s energy and talents without enough vacations or welfare for employees, the current development will be stuck at a halt in the immediate future. In conclusion, working longer
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 is enhanced by most
people
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’s underlying belief that the harder they
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, the sooner they will achieve their goals and the more independent they will become. But we must understand that
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 is not beneficial for our mental health and
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 wellness in the long term.

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