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Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

#scientists #technology #experts #society #musicians #artists
It is true that nowadays
people
 more care about
scientists
 and
technology
 rather than artworks and plays. It is taught by some parts of society that living with cutting-edge
technology
 is the only thing that matters in
this
 modern world. I completely agree that society should put all its efforts to supports
scientists
 and
technology
. On the one hand, several Sarah Everard celebrities have lost their popularity in recent years. A survey that analyzed the reason behind the high rate of suicide and addiction in youngsters, shows that youth have had that kind of thoughts after watching their show. Another reason is that their luxury lifestyles have many negative impacts on
people
's mental conditions.
For example
, every person that followed influencers on Instagram on a regular basis is more likely to suffer psychological problems. It may be because they compare their routine
lives
 with their pictures.
On the other hand
, each individual benefits from advances in
technology
 and research in every aspect of their
lives
.
First
, our
lives
 have become easier since
technology
 stepped into our
lives
.
For example
, instant Internet offers the easiest way to reach the formation you wanted to investigate.
However
, elderly
people
 who are deprived of the Internet encounter many obstacles.
Second
,
scientists
' contribution to one's life can be noticed by everyone. From a health perspective, diseases are more likely to prevent by early diagnosis. In conclusion,
although
 some
people
 believe that we should count artists as important as
scientists
,
this
 idea is ignored by the majority of
people
 in
this
 modern era.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • valued
  • modern society
  • scientists
  • technology experts
  • musicians
  • artists
  • reliance
  • scientific advancements
  • practical benefits
  • driving economic growth
  • daily lives
  • culture
  • human emotions
  • express ideas
  • provoke thought
  • spiritual well-being
  • emotional well-being
  • preserving cultural heritage
  • subjective nature
  • diversity
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