Your friend was supposed to visit you soon, but due to some personal problems you can’t meet him / her on the specified date. Write a letter to him or her explaining the situation. In your letter, you have to: – Apologise to your friend. – Explain why it’s not possible to meet now. – Suggest an alternative date for the meeting.

Dear Jenny, How are you, I am writing to you to let you know we can'
t
meet in
next
Friday
at the coffee shop, I do apologize for
this
inconvenience for you, and would you mind changing the date
in
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next
Sunday? Due to I got a message from my mum yesterday, she will come in
next
Friday
to my home,since under the pandemic, we have 3 years didn'
t
see each other. She want to give me a
superise
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surprise
supervise
super Aise

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so she didn'
t
tell me the travel plan. Under the case, I would have to pick her in the airport
in
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on

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that day, as you know, I am living rural town that far away from the airport, and I don'
t
want her along by bus
that
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because

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she would have some heavy baggage. Under
this
situation, I have to drive 6 hours to meet her
in
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on

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Friday
. So hope to get your understanding to change if we meet
at
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apply

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Sunday, by the way, my mum said, she misses you so much, and she
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hope
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tohope

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join us to meet together, she knows your birthday
in
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is

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this
month, as well as she prepares a gift for you when we meet. if you are free
at
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on

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Friday
please let me know. Looking for your reply
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Your
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sincerely Ella
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