Many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have had a negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays,the internet has been playing a vital role as well as drawbacks to the community and personal life.Social networks like
Facebook
have brought up a critical impact on daily life.I agree with the statement and under the line will be discussed the causes of the social networks. In my opinion,
Facebook
has caused so many problems in society.
Firstly
,they create fake videos and uploaded edited photos.Because higher the viewers,likes and followers they earn.They never show reality and the audience believes and tries to act the same.
For instance
,even if they are not in the USA they edit photos and write 'at USA' which makes another person willing to visit.
Moreover
,some children give burden to parents with unnecessary buying items which they have seen on the internet.
Secondly
,I have seen some people involved in relationships or affairs get divorced.Nowadays,divorce cases are increasing because of the internet.They had just seen each in the video call or chat and shared fake about themselves,in reality when they lived together they couldn't compromise each other and get separated.
Thirdly
,some people do fraud.
for example
, these days online shopping are
also
available on
Facebook
through the link shared.
This
is from my experiences because once I had done online shopping from the link shared on
Facebook
,I had paid money
also
and didn't get the items.Because it was frauds. Henceforth,it helps to communicate with each other
however
it has so many impacts as I mentioned above.
Furthermore
,in the future,
Facebook
should be banned so there won't be any problems among the nations.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • erosion
  • face-to-face
  • interactions
  • privacy concerns
  • data breaches
  • misinformation
  • polarize
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • procrastination
  • productivity
  • social isolation
  • dissemination
  • breeding ground
  • vast amounts
  • personal information
  • mental health
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