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Schools should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today

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Nowadays in the world of capitalism,
finance
 is one of the most important knowledge for everyone to survive with income, expenses, saving and investment. Some people learn how to manage their
finance
 from their parents while some learn how to manage by themselves. In my opinion, a school should teach their students how to survive financially.
Finance
 is an interesting subject but can be complicated to understand, in my opinion. I agree that school should teach their student to manage their own
money
 from a very young age to make it a habit and continue to do so when they grow up.
For example
, schools should teach students how to keep records of their income, and
expense
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 and learn to save up some
money
 for
the
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future proposal or for emergencies.
Also
, low-risk investments like bank savings should be taught in
institute
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 and
children
 should learn that
money
 can grow more value when investing or bank saving.
On the other hand
,
finance
 is a complicated subject to learn at a very young age, especially investments that can be risky and needs deep understanding and knowledge to make a decision.
This
 might be too risky for schools to teach
children
 how to invest in stocks or funding since teachers themselves are not experts on those topics and
children
 could make a mistake by losing a lot of
fund
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 on it. In conclusion, basic
finance
 is a necessary and fascinating subject to learn at school to help offspring learn about
money
, how to manage
money
, how to save
money
 and how to grow
money
. Fundamental
finance
 should be taught and practised so
children
 can manage their own
money
 when they grow up.
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