Last year you met someone on holidays and become friends. He/she has informed you that they will be near to your home town on business in a few months’ time. Write a letter to your friend inviting them to stay with you. In your letter •Say how pleased you are to hear from them. •Invite them to stay with you. •Tell them about your ideas of how you could spend the time together. You do not need to write any addresses.

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Dear Jass, I hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and good spirits. It's been a

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since we

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met. I received your message and am delighted about your upcoming trip near to my city. Your letter reminded me of fond memories from our school time. My family and I are very excited to meet you again after many years. As you'll stay here for more than a week so, why don't you spend those moments with us at my place? It'll be a great reunion, and I have a beautiful guest room that will be yours during your visit. You can enjoy the various culinary delights of my town after your business meeting.

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, we can explore all the famous local attractions together and go on a road trip as the weather here will be quite pleasant. I'm sure you'll enjoy it to the fullest. I look forward to seeing you soon. Best Regards, Tajinder Singh

tajinder.panagFri Feb 14 2025

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Task Achievement

Consider adding a brief sentence to elaborate on your excitement or specific memories to enhance the emotional connection with your friend.

Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure a smooth transition between the invitation and plans by using linking phrases such as 'Additionally' or 'Furthermore'.

Task Achievement

The letter has a warm and friendly tone, which is appropriate for the context of inviting a friend.

Coherence and Cohesion

Good use of varied vocabulary and sentences that effectively communicate your message.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

159 words

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