You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter explain where you live describe the problem give reasons why you do not want this development

Dear David, I am a resident living in Cook Street,
Airport
Road, you can call me Ella, I am writing
this
want to express my opinion with government explore
plan
in our local
airport
. Since
last
weekend local news published they are
plan
building more facilities to increase the international flights, our community
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are
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the crazy
plan
. As you know, there are
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jams
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airport
road
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many
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for many

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years issue, the city council useless
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the
trafic
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problem. What is more, they do nothing to measure
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traffic

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issue
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issues

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,
in contrast
, to explore
airport
development. In my thinking of
way
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, we should
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to consider how to improve the public
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smooth as well as
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efficiency

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, in the
next
, to
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discuss

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the
airport
development. As your newspaper is our local voice, I trust you may want to know our local comments
for
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this
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sincerely Ella
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