You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter explain where you live describe the problem give reasons why you do not want this development

Dear David, I am a resident living in Cook Street,

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Road, you can call me Ella, I am writing

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want to express my opinion with government explore

plan

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in our local

airport

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. Since

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weekend local news published they are

plan

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building more facilities to increase the international flights, our community

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are

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the crazy

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. As you know, there are

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horrible

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traffic

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airport

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road

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many

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years issue, the city council useless

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the

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trafic

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problem. What is more, they do nothing to measure

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trafic

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issue

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in contrast

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, to explore

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development. In my thinking of

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, we should

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to consider how to improve the public

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smooth as well as

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, to

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discuss

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development. As your newspaper is our local voice, I trust you may want to know our local comments

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plan

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sincerely Ella

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May 9, 2022

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

149 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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