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You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter explain where you live describe the problem give reasons why you do not want this development

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Dear David, I am a resident living in Cook Street,
Airport
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 Road, you can call me Ella, I am writing
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 want to express my opinion with government explore
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 in our local
airport
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. Since
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 weekend local news published they are
plan
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 building more facilities to increase the international flights, our community
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 the crazy
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. As you know, there are
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horrible
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traffic
 jams
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airport
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road
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 the
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trafic
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traffic
 problem. What is more, they do nothing to measure
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, we should
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 to consider how to improve the public
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traffic
 smooth as well as
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discuss
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 development. As your newspaper is our local voice, I trust you may want to know our local comments
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 sincerely Ella
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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