Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph illustrates the participation of the adults in seven different
sports
activities( Walking, basketball,
cricket
, Jogging, Gym, Football and Hiking) for two years 1997 and 2017. Overall, Gentle walking was the most popular sport for the given period of time, While the least popular game for the
year
1997 and 2017 was basketball and
Cricket
respectively. In regards
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the
year
1997, Gentle walking accounted for 50,000 participants which was the highest
number
compared to the other
sports
. Followed by that was Gym,
Hicking
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Hiking
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,Jogging and football which had a
number
between 34000 to 35000. While the least popular
sports
for the
year
1997 were
cricket
and jogging attracted only 28000 and 9000 participants.
On the other hand
, In the
year
2017, the
first
three popular
sports
were Gentle walking, football and hicking with
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around 55, 48 and 49 respectively. While Jogging and Gym had the same participation
number
of 35000 adults for each. Similar to the
year
1997 basketball and
cricket
were the least popular among the young crowd.
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