More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return of traditional medicine should be encouraged. What extent do you agree?

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modern era, People tend to get attracted to money and living a high-quality standard of living, but they forget the most important aspect of living a good and a long life which is health, It is obvious that each and everything comes with a good and bad side, wherewith modern lifestyle comes with ample of health problems, which today's modern medicines are unable to cure

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I partially agree that traditional medicine should be encouraged and return back in action.

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with. there are myriad reasons behind my agreement with

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and the most prominent one is that traditional medicine has almost a cure for each and every well-being issue, which today's medicines lack. To elucidate

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Ayurvedic science has solutions to almost each and every well-being problem a human will ever face.

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, A survey conducted by AIMMS in 2015 in India Concluded that Ayurvedic science has solutions to more than 96% of health problems in human history.

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it is a must to bring it back for the help of the needy. Is there any drawback ? Certainly, there are. As mentioned earlier each and everything has a positive and a negative side, to elaborate on

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, Ayurveda has proven to be effective but it takes more time.

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, from any to most of it has a slow healing time which is the main drawback,

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, Today's fast life demands quick results it is rejected by the society. to conclude, For some urgent and emergency needs it should be back and be accepted by people.

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, government and medical research centres should study how Traditional medicine works and find a solution to shorten the healing time.

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Topic Vocabulary:

sedentary lifestyle
chronic conditions
holistic approach
preventive care
natural remedies
cultural heritage
ancestral knowledge
integration
complementary healthcare
regulation
standardization
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