The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

This

graph indicates the percentages of household expenditures in one country in the world over 50 years from 1950 to 2010.

Overall

, there was a decrease significantly in part of the housing,

while

increased gradually in all of the other parts

Begin

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within

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in

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1950, housing was the highest percentage around 72.1% of household expenditures,

while

the closest part after it was

the

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food about 11.2%. All other parts were less than 7% between all

of

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them. In 2010, all of the numbers have been changed dramatically. Food, Transportation, and Other have increased

duble

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double

more than three times each.

However

, there was a drop in the per cent of Housing from around 72.1% to less than 22% over the period. Health care goes up steadily from 2.4% to 4.5% during the same period.

last

but not least, education

household

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households

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stayed the same at approximately 6 % over the period.