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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems, To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Being a foreigner in a country where everything is new, can be a complicated thing. Communicating in a tongue other than what you are used to can lead to difficulties in getting
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 the local people and
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 hinder our day-to-day activities. I personally agree with
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 notion since a foreign accent can cause a language barrier and social isolation.
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 with, learning a new language is a time-consuming and difficult task and to add to
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, sounding like a native is an incredible feat in itself. So, try as we may, our pronunciation and intonation will be off which will make us stand out more.
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, the citizens of that country are prone to alienate us, making socialising a problem.
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, many expatriates suffer from depression and anxiety
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 which they cannot prosper at work or in academics and their performance seems to suffer.
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, the problem becomes even bigger when foreigners have to go out just to fetch groceries or have to find some unusual locations
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 their inability to familiarise themselves with the road signs or sign boards. These types of practical hurdles can result in a horrible experience. On top of that, some natives might even discriminate against them or even harass them.
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, chances are significantly higher for foreigners
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 tricked or taken advantage of. In conclusion, people living in a out of their native nation have to face myriad
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social and practical issues.
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 is
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 the fact that having a different way of talking can confuse locals and make them isolate the foreigner instinctively.

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task achievement
Consider adding more specific examples to further substantiate the claims made in the essay. For instance, providing anecdotal evidence or statistical data can enhance the relevance and specificity of the points discussed.
coherence cohesion
Pay attention to sentence structure and variety. Try to avoid repetitive sentence patterns to make the essay more engaging.
coherence cohesion
Try to develop transitions between paragraphs for smoother flow. This can be achieved by using linking words or phrases to connect ideas systematically.
task achievement
The introduction effectively sets the stage for the discussion with a clear agreement to the statement and presents the two main areas of focus: social and practical problems.
coherence cohesion
The essay concludes with a summary that reinforces the main points and gives a sense of closure to the discussion.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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