Some people believe that an effective way to reduce industrial pollution is to tax the companies which cause these types of pollution. others think that there are other ways.
Due to industrialization,
earth
Correct article usage
the earth
suffer
from excessive Change the verb form
suffers
pollution
. Some people argue that implying high tax in
Change preposition
on
companies
an
efficient means of reducing industrial Add a missing verb
is an
pollution
. However
others believe that there are other effective ways. Add a comma
,However
This
essay will outline why they support each side and suggest my opinion on the matter.
On the one hand, excessive taxes
play key
factor in decreasing the Add an article
a key
pollution
of companies
. As owners feel burdened of
Change preposition
by
taxes
, they will make less number of products. Therefore
, they will less
pollute Correct quantifier usage
apply
water
and air Correct article usage
the water
that
is
caused by Correct subject-verb agreement
are
producing
. Replace the word
production
Moreover
, when companies
produce a small number of goods, the usage of aircraft and ships that pollute air
and the ocean will decrease. Add an article
the air
For example
, recent media in Korea reports that food mileage has increased about 30% from 2001 to 2010 in Korea. This
is because of exporting and importing preservative food from a significant number of companies
. As the example clearly illustrates, once companies
less
export commodities, they will Correct quantifier usage
apply
less
use fossil fuels that bring about industrial Correct quantifier usage
apply
pollution
.
On the other hand
, there are other compelling method
to address industrial Change the wording
methods
pollution
. Firstly
, governments can make harsher regulation
Fix the agreement mistake
regulations
of
Change preposition
on
pollution
. When companies
break the law, they have pay
penalties. Fix the infinitive
to pay
As a result
, they can learn from the consequences of their actions. In addition
, governments can allocate state funds to the development of green energy
such
as solar and wind energy
that do not release greenhouse gases.
In conclusion, while I accept that implying high taxes
in
industrial Change preposition
on
pollution
can sometimes be useful as companies
will produce less
goods, there is no doubt that implementing harsher legislation and developing Change the quantifier
fewer
eco friendly
Add a hyphen
eco-friendly
energy
are
more beneficial than Change the verb form
is
taxes
. From my point of view, expecting less producing
is not realistic since consumers need commodities. Replace the word
production
Hence
, making a stricter regulation
and allocating Fix the agreement mistake
regulations
to
green Change preposition
apply
energy
by governments can be the most efficient ways.Submitted by hiasince38 on
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