plastic bags,plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment.what damage does plastic do to the environment? what can be done by govermant and individuals to solve this problem?

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the present,the world suffering from various types of
pollutions
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may occur mostly by
plastic
items
who
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the surroundings.Do you know
this
is the big
problem
in the world? In
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discribed
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describe
described
why
this
problem
happend
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happened
happen
happens
and what can
be do
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for
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solve
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this
problem
. What are the
palstic
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plastic
items that I mention
about
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?It includes different
type
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types
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of
plastic
bags,
plastic
bottles and
plastic
packages and etc.
This
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materials
are not decay
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.
thatswhy
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that why
these are more
hamful
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harmful
for
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nature
.
Plastic
item has been doing more
damages
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not only the
nature
but
also
to
the
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humans.For
instence
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instance
,people may suffer from more diseases,
mostly
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effect for older people and
infent
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infant
infants
also
.As well as environmental
pollusion
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pollution
,
water
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and water
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pollution
also
.
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the beauty of
the
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nature
is totally changed when people remove all
of
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plastic
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items to the outside.
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,some birds eat
this
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this plastic material
these plastic materials
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plastic
materials.
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hence
we will be lost some parts of
nature
.
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more
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if
this
will
happent
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happen
happens
,the government must
be take
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a decision for stopping
this
problem
.We all are should be love
to
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the
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apply
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nature
.
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