students leave high school without learning the way how to manage their money. what are the reasons and solutions for this issue?

Recently, plenty of young children lack knowledge about financial management. I think that problem is caused by the

schools

and the

parents

not

teach

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them and I believe that the

parents

need to spend more time as well as the

schools

put more attention on teaching them how to manage

money

.

To begin

with, many teenagers lack the ability to manage budgets. For the

first

reasons

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reason

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, the teenagers who grow up in a rich

family

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families

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with their

parents

, which means they have no need to worry about

consumptions

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,

such

as rental fees, bills, or

buy

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buying

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food.

For example

, many of my classmates are

allow

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to play all day,

seeing

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a movies

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a movie

movies

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,

going

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to enmainments and

playing

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games, because their

parents

give them

everythings

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everything

, so they do not have to earn

salary

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.

Additionally

, the

schools

only pay attention

on

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young people's

achivements

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achievements

achievement

.

Schools

care

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As a result

, a rich environment makes teenagers not realize the

improtant

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importance

important

of financial management.

Secondly

, saving

money

and

a

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important

of

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apply

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things of earning

salary

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a salary

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can be taught by

parents

. As

parents

play a severe role in children’s

life

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lives

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, they can educate their children

start

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from small things.

For

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instead

, when the teenager demands a toy,

mother

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the mother

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can make them do

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the house

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house work

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housework

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then

get toys. In doing so,

younagers

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youngsters

youngers

younger

can

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learn

be learning

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learning

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tolearning

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manage

money

from

small

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age. To sum up, a large number of students’ finances rely on their

family

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families

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;

therefore

, they do not understand the

improtant

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importance

important

of saving or earning

money

.

Hence

, It is important to educate them for life.