You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter explain where you live describe the problem give reasons why you do not want this development

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to raise my concern about the project

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for

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our

airport

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. I am a nature

enthsiatic

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enthusiastic

who

live

Correct subject-verb agreement

lives

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near the

airport

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. Having an

airport

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adjacently brings a lot of advantages though, please never underestimate the drawbacks of it.

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the reason why I am asking

help

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for help

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for a louder voice via your news channel. There will be a lot of major problems if the government is going to

enlarge

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enlarges

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the

airport

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carelessly.

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with, most of my

morning

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mornings

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were destroyed by the noise of

airplane

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aeroplane

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landings.

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, I never had a good sleep

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the

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morning due to the early flights. As far as I am concerned, it will be worse if the number of flights has

been

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increased. What is more, due to current bad transportation, most of our roads are used to be busying and congesting. Without making better infrastructure,

such

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as bus services and hotel facilities, having a bigger

airport

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is pointless. I hope you can put

this

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letter

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your program called - open letters from citizens. I trust your media may give

this

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matter the government's immediate attention. Yours sincerely, Tun Naung Win

tunnaungwin11

May 10, 2022

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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

198 words

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You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter explain where you live describe the problem give reasons why you do not want this development

It is important for all towns and cities to have large public spaces such as parks and squares, Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe the media should be allowed to publish private information about people, while others are against it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Public transport should be funded by the government so that it can be free for the people who use it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Nowadays, more and more children play computer games. Why do you think this is the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Others believe that a woman's role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice