When someone achieves greatness thanks to an innovation or other breakthrough, it is usually agreed that the individual has a high level of intelligence.  Do you think that inborn thinking skills play the main role in the successful life of people?  What role does ‘nurtured’ intelligence play in achievements of a successful person?

Nowadays
people
tend to believe that academic achievements are the result of inborn
skills
. It is considered that hereditary and environmental factors are both significant for
successful
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life.
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mind Inborn thinking
skills
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are handed down from parents, play a noticeable role in determining an individual's
intelligence
level.
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some characteristics of a human,
such
as
intelligence
, can be genetically predisposed.
Scientifically
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proven fact is that certain genes are responsible for good thinking abilities. It can be clearly seen taking into consideration some families where all members have a high IQ.
However
, good genes work only on a certain level, because thinking
skills
must be improved by
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.   Nurture, which is a combination of environmental variables and a person's experience,
also
significantly influences
intelligence
level. According to scientists, life-long learning is essential for everyone, because
that is
how our brain can be trained and properly used. Without effort, relying only on inborn
skills
people
cannot accomplish their goals.
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, most
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people
knew that Albert
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genes were fascinating, but did they know that he was raised in a difficult environment where he chose to test the limits of his
intelligence
and that was the reason for his success.   To conclude, for successful life both inborn and developed thinking
skills
are required. So
people
must keep learning and enhancing their power of mind throughout their life.
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