You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter • correct the information in the article • explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information • suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to bring the incorrect information about my town that I have scrutinised in one of the articles, published in your international travel magazine on 5th-May-2022, to your immediate concern. I would like to correct the information regarding the location of the water-sports club which is located on the outskirts of the city whereas the writer has mentioned it in the centre of the town.

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there is one in the centre of the city, it is closed to the public since 2016. I think that it is crucial to update

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data at the earliest possible since it will mislead many tourists.

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, they will have a horrible experience visiting the town because it will not just waste their time but money as well. It would be great if you could stop producing

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copies of the given article and publish a new one containing the updated location.

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urge checking the facts by inquiring the concerned department prior to publication due to a magazine like yours has a deep influence on the wider community. I hope that you would take the necessary actions in

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regard. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Your's faithfully, Gurpreet Kaur

Submitted by gurpreetmann1994 on Tue May 10 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

210 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Rectify
Misrepresentation
Tourism
Editor
Credibility
Accuracy
Local heritage
Fact-checking
Repercussions
Counteractive measures
Publishing ethics
Clarification
Factual error
Misconception
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