Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/she would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email • describe where you lived when you were a student at the university  • recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation  • warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

Dear Affy, How are you? I hope you are doing well. I was so excited when I received your email saying you got accepted into forcados college.congratulations to you! I am so proud of you my friend.I
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accommodation. Well, I would suggest that you stay within the school for easier access to facilities. I stayed in the
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hostel which was mainly for girls ,
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in the champion hostel strictly for boys. You should meet the housekeeper of the hostel premises and inform he or she that you are a fresher in need of a place to stay,they will instantly give you a form to fill
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you proceed to make payment to secure your space in the apartment.
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accommodation inside the school .
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pay extra attention when making payments. I really hope to see you soon . My regards to mom and dad! With Love, Dumebi.
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  • house-hunting
  • budgeting
  • commute
  • utilities
  • security deposit
  • lease
  • proximity
  • amenities
  • landlord
  • tenant rights
  • real estate agent
  • furnished/unfurnished
  • flatmates
  • on-campus/off-campus living
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