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most of our information comes from the internet are incorrect. do you agree or disagree.

#information #internet
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It is argued that the
internet
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 provides false information to us.
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 because the
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 has become very mature as compared to the old days.
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 we will discuss why some populations believe that info that the
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 providers are incorrect,
then
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 we will talk about how information on the
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 is useful and how it helps people around the world. In the 1990s when the
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 has introduced the info which used to be published on the
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 had no way to verify or be corrected by others.
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 leads to the belief among
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 that the
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 provides false data.
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, there are companies that use to do false advertisements on the web, due to which many people have lost their money. folk were not trusting the web because of the scam that was happening on the
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. For ,example a hacker used to create a false
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 and used to sell it for a cheap price
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 any customer trying to purchase the
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, his credit card information was stolen.
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, these issues of false data, hacking and selling can be under control when companies like Google, Microsoft, Wikipedia and Amazon came into the picture. Wikipedia came up with the solution to verify and approve any content publish on their website. Because of
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 verified data is made available on the
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. Hackers have a difficult time fooling anyone because of the afford made by Google.
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 purchasing a
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 is risky online, folk are buying a
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 from the
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 ,Thanks to Amazon. In conclusion, modern technology is making the
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 a safe place and many advancements are coming to address the remaining issue on the
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. Trusting the
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 and virtual things will make people's lives faster and easier.
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