some people say that children should always aim to be the best at whatever they do . however others disagree . discuss both these views and give your opinion .
All children should be encouraged to do their best in life,whatever they decide. But,some old people, still believe that at a young age our mental ability is not mature enough
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is our birthright,whatever we want to do in our journey, should be decided by us only.
If from the start,we want to develop a particular skill in a developing child, then
we should not resist or enforce to do something,which they don't like. If they like to go swimming or to play football-cricket or any kind of extracurricular activity,we should boost to do so. Because, in today's world Sachin,dhoni, and Virat are the players, they are not because of their passion only but due to their parent's support also
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their parents never stopped them to play cricket and forced them to study.
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support them to achieve their goal by all means. The best example to memorize here is, the Phogat sisters in the wrestling world. When the whole society was against them for the indulgement of girls in this
kind of game. Their father supported him and vow to them to achieve what they want from their soul.
So to conclude the point I agree with the opinion that children should aim to achieve their goals what they think is the best for their carrier. Every successful people in each and every field would agree with the above statement without any doubt. Because you tend to give your hundred per cent in the field or task if you like that one.Submitted by biswal.akankshya on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite