Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sporting facilities, others however say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

The map shows the changes in the central hospital between 2007 and 2010. In the first map of
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hospital in 2007, we can see that the first ring
road
and the hospital
road
are three forks, and the hospital
road
and the central
road
are the
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. There is a public parking lot on the east side of Hospital
Road
and there are few buildings around. In the year of 2010, one of the most notable changes
were
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changes to roads and public facilities. The junction of the ring
road
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the
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road
and the hospital
road
becomes a ring circle and is connected to the bus station. The west and north sides of Central Hospital remain unchanged. A public car park was constructed to the east of the central hospital. It is worth mentioning that the existing
road
adjustment has made transportation more convenient, and the construction of bus stops and parking lots has provided people with more transportation convenience
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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