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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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These two maps illustrate how the
road
 and buildings around a city hospital from 2007 to 2010. There was considerable development
of
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 the traffic environment of the hospital. It is quite easy to find that there are 3 main differences, including
new
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car
 park,
better
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 bus station and new roundabouts. In more detail, there was only a
car
 park for both staff and
public
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 in 2007 on the east side near the Hospital
Road
 which
connect
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 the Ring
Road
 surrounding the hospital and the City
Road
 while in 2010 it was specifically for
staffs
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 and a bigger public
car
 parking for
public
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 was built at the east side of the hospital and outside the Ring
Road
. Both
car
 parks can be entered on the Ring
Road
.
Besides
, two new roundabouts were constructed at the intersections that the Hospital
Road
 made with the Ring
Road
 and City
Road
. The 6 small bus stops with three on each side of the Hospital
Road
 in 2007 has been moved out and a new bus station with
much
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 larger area was to the west of the
road
 and can be arrived by 2 roads from the 2 roundabouts.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • phenomenon
  • intrigue
  • enigma
  • compelling
  • addictive
  • chilling
  • forensics
  • procedural
  • thriller
  • suspense
  • psychological
  • criminalistics
  • deviant
  • intricate
  • red herrings
  • misdirection
  • sardonically
  • socioeconomic
  • catharsis
  • moral ambiguity
  • multidimensional
  • protagonist
  • antagonist
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