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Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#organisations #employees #dress #value #quality #work #appearance
What we wear may influence someone to act
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 us.
Thus
, many companies obligate their
work forces
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 to dress up in smart suits. While
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 the other group think their work performance is matter most. Personally, I firmly agree that how we manage ourselves at
office
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 is
vital
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 than our appearance, as it will influence to
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 process.
Nonetheless
, sometimes
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outfit
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outfits
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 could bring
luckiness
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.
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these
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 two sides and my personal opinion. On the one hand, institutions might ask their workers to wear
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formal
costume
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 for several reasons.
Firstly
,
employer
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 believe what they wear may influence
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their brand image. In another word, when they dress executively, clients will certainly think that they are intelligent and ready for handling every
jobs
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.
For instance
, a lawyer mostly wears neatly to show their clients that they are ready to overcome any problems.
Secondly
, some jobs require their workers to wear
smart
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suit
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 for showing their pride. As we know,
for example
, civil servants will always be asked to have a smart dress, which aims to show their pride as a part of regulation makers.
On the other hand
, some industries allow their worker to wear casual
outfit
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 for numerous opinions.
To begin
 with, it is because they let their
worker
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to
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get a free mind which could increase their creativity,
as a result
, workers could get unique ideas. As an
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, usually an architectural company that offers creativity, they have no regulation over their uniform as the company hopes to earn flexible
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, not stiffly. To conclude, in my opinion, we cannot deny that
first
 impression matter most,
furthermore
, a nice outfit will leave a good mark
to
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 the person, especially for
job
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 that
require
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 meeting new people in their business process.
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