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These days it is much easier for many people to travel to different countries for tourism than in the past. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

#people #travel #countries #tourism #development
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data
dates
of
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on
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 Australian teenagers' consumption of
pizza
,
fish
 and
chips
 and
hamburgers
 in different years from 1988 to 1999.
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 the beginning,
fish
 and
chips
 took up the most part and the
number
 of it is at least 10 times of the other two kinds of fast food. But after that, the
number
 of
fish
 and
chips
 kept down totally while the numbers of
pizza
 and
hamburgers
 kept climbing. In 1999 the
number
 of
hamburgers
 was bigger than that of
fish
 and
chips
. In 1000, the
number
 of
pizza
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pizzas
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 increased above that of
fish
 and
chips
. After 1000,
hamburgers
 had been the most fast food that
Austrlian
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Australian
 teenagers
consumned
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consumed
 and
pizza
 the
second
,
fish
 and
chips
 the
last
. It can be seen that in 1000, both the numbers of
pizza
 and
hamburgers
 were about two times of
fish
 and
chips
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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