Today more and more people buy products online. What problems does it create? How to solve them?

As you know
now days
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people
doesn't
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have much time to go market or shopping mall to buy their stuff the easier way
order
through online which easier convenient for them they can choose what item
are
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required for their daily requirements
nd
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and
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nation can
order
such
, grocery,electronic ,home accessories.
However
now days
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which mostly facing problem when you place the
order
it
is look
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nice but when we receive the product it not exactly what we
aspecting
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respecting
also
the quality of the product its poor quality. I would like to suggest to
online
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company if they really want to increase their businesses in online they should have to provide
such
a good quality
nd
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reliable which can people able to
to
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more
order
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • durability
  • sustainability
  • longevity
  • affordability
  • consumerism
  • waste
  • environmental impact
  • value for money
  • customer satisfaction
  • brand loyalty
  • consumption
  • economic growth
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