Your friend was supposed to visit you soon, but due to some personal problems you can’t meet him / her on the specified date. Write a letter to him or her explaining the situation. In your letter, you have to: – Apologise to your friend. – Explain why it’s not possible to meet now. – Suggest an alternative date for the meeting.

Dear Ms Affy, How are you doing? I am writing to inform you that I will no longer be available
next
week Friday and I am sincerely sorry that I failed to inform you on time. Please accept my apology, I have a problem in my workplace which I would like to fix immediately. Ignoring it could make me lose my job,so, I concluded that
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will rectify
this
problem instantly.
Also
, it is certain that solving
this
problem will take a long while as to the reason why I
canceled
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our plan.
Next
month will be a better time to meet and catch up as well,you can pick a
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