You have recently migrated to another country. Now write this letter to your friend to describe your present life. In your letter say.. When you have moved to this country Why you chose this country How things are now for you

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Dear Affy, How are you doing my good friend? Can you remember when I mentioned that I was moving to Canada? Well,I am

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in Canada! It feels so good to be here. I am sorry I haven't kept in touch with you for a while now, I have really been trying to settle down,I arrived here about two weeks ago and since

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, I've been trying to sort myself out properly. You've been curious to know why I chose Canada over France, well, I got a job here and the pay is a good offer.

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, You know I don't know how to speak French

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why I didn't go there.

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,Since I got here I've been really busy but I believe that before the week runs out, I'd have settled in properly. Things are going as planned and I'm in love with the weather. You know it's usually hot in Nigeria but it's the total opposite in Ontario. I'm so sorry I have to go now. I hope to hear from you soon my lovely friend. Bye! Yours Truly, Dumebi.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

183 words

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opportunity
culture shock
adjustment
adventure
language barrier
bureaucracy
immigration process
exciting
challenging
networking
international community
integration
support system
job prospects
standard of living
multicultural
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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