You have recently migrated to another country. Now write this letter to your friend to describe your present life. In your letter say.. When you have moved to this country Why you chose this country How things are now for you

Dear Affy, How are you doing my good friend? Can you remember when I mentioned that I was moving to Canada? Well,I am
finally
in Canada! It feels so good to be here. I am sorry I haven't kept in touch with you for a while now, I have really been trying to settle down,I arrived here about two weeks ago and since
then
, I've been trying to sort myself out properly. You've been curious to know why I chose Canada over France, well, I got a job here and the pay is a good offer.
Also
, You know I don't know how to speak French
that is
why I didn't go there.
Finally
,Since I got here I've been really busy but I believe that before the week runs out, I'd have settled in properly. Things are going as planned and I'm in love with the weather. You know it's usually hot in Nigeria but it's the total opposite in Ontario.  I'm so sorry I have to go now. I hope to hear from you soon my lovely friend. Bye! Yours Truly, Dumebi.
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