You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have recently moved to a new neighbourhood and would like to join a sports centre there. You have found a private sports club. Write a letter to the manager of the sports club. In your letter, introduce yourself say why are you interested in this sports club ask some questions about the club e.g facilities, membership, costs etc. Write at least 150 words.

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Dear sir, I hope you are doing good. I am writing

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letter to enquire about the sports

club

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. I hear so many good things about your

club

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from my friend who is already a member of the

club

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. My name is Vicky and I am 29 years old, I am a sportsperson and I play cricket. I won so many trophies and championships in many national tournaments. My family recently moved to the village which is near to your

club

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. After hearing so many good things from my friend about your sports

club

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, I made up my mind and I want to take a subscription to the

club

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but before that can you please tell me more about other facilities that you have.

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if possible can you please tell me the subscription cost and any discount if possible because my wife is

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interested . I am looking forward to hearing soon from you. Yours sincerely, Vicky

vivek6909127Fri Aug 02 2024

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task achievement

Your letter is clear and achieves the task well. However, make sure to separate your ideas clearly into paragraphs to improve readability. For instance, you could start a new paragraph when talking about your background and another one when asking your questions.

coherence cohesion

The logical structure of your letter is good, but it can be improved by using more cohesive devices such as 'Firstly,' 'Secondly,' etc. This will help the reader follow your points more easily.

task achievement

You have included all necessary parts of the letter, such as the introduction, the reason for writing, and the questions you have.

task achievement

The tone of the letter is polite and appropriate for the context.

coherence cohesion

You have a clear greeting and closing, which adds to the professionalism of your letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

159 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

new resident
engage in
fitness regimen
personal commitment
specific facilities
preferred activities
variety of facilities
membership options
joining fees
benefits
cost structure
included amenities
personal trainers
nutritional advice services
child-minding facilities
social events
eagerness
convenient time
discuss membership

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