Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance.

It is accurately true that we cannot judge someone by their cover,

nevertheless

, it will be different at the office. Many associations argue that how officers dress up

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mattering most. While the rest of the groups think that performance is much more vital. Personally, I agree with the

second

statement as a good performance will probably be the reason a

business

survived. In

this

essay, I will explain more these both sides. On the

one

hand, suits are needed to give a good impression when attending

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formal occasion. As it probably will get more attention from other companies, especially for

business

which has to meet many powerful people.

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, an investor may choose a company who comes to a meeting

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a good dress rather than a casual

one

, because the

first

one

shows a professional than another

one

. Another reason is,

some

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institutions obligate a uniform to show the teammate system at their place.

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this

, it might be helpful for customers to recognize whether you are part of the

business

or not. As an illustration, in the restaurant, waiters wearing

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will certainly make customers easier to know who can help them

for

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the service.

On the other hand

, physical appearance does not define your success. some

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businessman tends to have a habit

wearing

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a

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casual

clothes

rather than

a

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smart look

clothes

. It is probably because

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relaxing

clothes

might help them

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a unique idea.

For example

, a well-known businessman in Indonesia, namely Yusuf Hamka,

prefer

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to wear a t-shirt rather than a shirt as it is more convenient and cheaper,

however

, his great ideas over

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are popular among his partners. In

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, some

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of jobs value creativity

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just an immaculate dress. As it will give them

a

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freedom, and

also

their job does not require

to meet

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many people. As we can see, an architect is more likely to wear

casual

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outfit as their job require a brilliant idea than a nice look officer. To conclude,

clothes

can be impressive for the

first

meeting,

however

in the end, what

matter

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most is our

intelligent

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towards our job.

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,

this

performance is the key point when

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search

from

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their

business

partner.