Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance.

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, it will be different at the office. Many associations argue that how officers dress up
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mattering most. While the rest of the groups think that performance is much more vital. Personally, I agree with the
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statement as a good performance will probably be the reason a
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hand, suits are needed to give a good impression when attending
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formal occasion. As it probably will get more attention from other companies, especially for
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which has to meet many powerful people.
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, an investor may choose a company who comes to a meeting
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a good dress rather than a casual
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, because the
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shows a professional than another
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institutions obligate a uniform to show the teammate system at their place.
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, it might be helpful for customers to recognize whether you are part of the
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or not. As an illustration, in the restaurant, waiters wearing
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will certainly make customers easier to know who can help them
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the service.
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, physical appearance does not define your success. some
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businessman tends to have a habit
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casual
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rather than
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smart look
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. It is probably because
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relaxing
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might help them
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a unique idea.
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, a well-known businessman in Indonesia, namely Yusuf Hamka,
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to wear a t-shirt rather than a shirt as it is more convenient and cheaper,
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, his great ideas over
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are popular among his partners. In
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, some
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of jobs value creativity
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just an immaculate dress. As it will give them
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freedom, and
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their job does not require
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many people. As we can see, an architect is more likely to wear
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outfit as their job require a brilliant idea than a nice look officer. To conclude,
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can be impressive for the
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meeting,
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in the end, what
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most is our
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towards our job.
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,
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performance is the key point when
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their
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partner.
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