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Everybody should be allowed addmission to university or colllage programs regardless of their level of academic ability. To what do you agree or disagree with the statement ? Give reason for your answer and iclude any relevent examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#everybody #addmission #university #colllage #programs #level #ability #reason #iclude #relevent
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I totally agree with
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 statement, no
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 what his or her level of
education
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 or ability to do, should be an admission to the
university
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. At ,
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 everyone has a right to
education
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 ,
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 it
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 depends upon the interest and abilities that he or she wants. In
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 ,essay we will
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 discuss some aspects of the topic and end with a relevant solution. Each and every person in the world has a right to eductions and
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 includes
education
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 beyond high school. Some people choose to go to
university
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 while others have a chosen college or other training programs. No
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 what he or she chooses a form of
education
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 no person, is there to make his or her decision of studies.
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, it
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 depends on interest and ability that what they want to become in future no
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 that he or she is no good in their interest subject or field, they will work hard and achieve what they want to get in that subject. Motivation plays a vital role in
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 case even if their level is a little bit poor or even the assignment is difficult for them. There are all different levels of
university
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 programs that fit or suit individual interests and goals. Because of
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, there is no reason to deny anyone a
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education
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. There is something else for everyone to get admission to the
university
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. Everyone has a right to
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 no
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 their age or level, and
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 in the choice that what course he or she fits in, they can choose by themself.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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