You are going to arrange a special party at your home next week. You want to invite a local artist who is a playback singer. Write a letter to him. Explain the occasion to him. Invite him to the party. Tell him why you want him to perform.

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Dear Mr. Sharma, I hope

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message finds you well. My name is Priya Mehta, and I am writing to invite you to a special event that I am hosting next Saturday. Please allow me to explain

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. On 27th January, I will be celebrating my parents' 25th wedding anniversary at my residence in Jaipur.

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is a significant milestone for our family, and we are planning a warm and memorable gathering with close friends and relatives. The event will commence at 6:00 PM and continue into the evening. It would be a great

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if you could join us as our special guest and perform some of your most cherished songs. Your music has always been a source of inspiration and joy for my family. My parents,

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, have a deep fondness for your song “Zindagi Ke Pal,” as it reminds them of their younger days and holds a special place in their hearts. Your presence and performance would undoubtedly make the celebration extraordinary, creating unforgettable memories for everyone attending. Please let me know if you are available to join us, and feel free to share any specific requirements or arrangements you may need. Thank you very much for considering my invitation. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Warm regards, Priya Mehta

seyyed.arshamMon Feb 24 2025

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Enhance the introduction to briefly mention the type of event earlier for more engagement.

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Ensure to maintain a formal tone throughout the letter, especially when addressing the artist.

coherence and cohesion

The structure of the letter is clear and logical, effectively guiding the reader through the message.

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The tone of the letter is warm and appropriate for inviting someone to a personal celebration.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

216 words

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