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Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, there is
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 what should be the goal of the
universities
. For some people, colleges must help
students
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 their chances to get well-paid jobs, while for others their role is related to the
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possibility
 to civilize individuals and nurture our societies and culture. In
this
 brief dissertation, I'd like to discuss both
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 of
view
, as well as
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draft a final conclusion pointing out a
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 among them. To start with the
first
point
 of
view
, it seems undeniable that
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 some
point
of
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 their lives, people will need to find a job, and their possibilities to find it
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 very tied to the level of formal education they have. As a consequence of
this
, both individuals and society expect that
universities
 can provide
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the right set of skills, whether
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hard or soft, to their
students
,
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 they're not going to be able to
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succeed
 after
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.
However
, even if I agree with
this
, it is
also
 important to notice that not all the education of
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future generations should be restricted by present working demands. And
that is
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precisely
 what makes me connect with the
second
point
 of
view
. Regarding it, it is especially important to
point
 out that
universities
also
 play an important role in training people in a more holistic way, by
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transmitting
 cultural and social aspects,
such
 as values, norms, and ways of thinking. In
this
 sense, if we reduce the role of
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education to the need to find a job, we
also
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 the potential of the
students
 and their future.
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Putting
 an example: I currently don't work in something related to what I studied, but all the informal contents that the university provided me are
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crucial to me in order to find a good job and perform well in it. In conclusion, from my
view
, what the
universities
 need to find is a balance between functional and meaningful
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.
In other words
, colleges should not forget the full picture while they're trying to help
students
 to get jobs.
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