Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there is

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agreement

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what should be the goal of the

universities

. For some people, colleges must help

students

to

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their chances to get well-paid jobs, while for others their role is related to the

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possibility

to civilize individuals and nurture our societies and culture. In

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of

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, as well as

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draft a final conclusion pointing out a

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among them. To start with the

first

point

of

view

, it seems undeniable that

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some

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their lives, people will need to find a job, and their possibilities to find it

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very tied to the level of formal education they have. As a consequence of

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, both individuals and society expect that

universities

can provide

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the right set of skills, whether

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hard or soft, to their

students

,

otherwise

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they're not going to be able to

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succeed

after

graduate

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.

However

, even if I agree with

this

, it is

also

important to notice that not all the education of

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future generations should be restricted by present working demands. And

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precisely

what makes me connect with the

second

point

of

view

. Regarding it, it is especially important to

point

out that

universities

also

play an important role in training people in a more holistic way, by

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transmitting

cultural and social aspects,

such

as values, norms, and ways of thinking. In

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sense, if we reduce the role of

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education to the need to find a job, we

also

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the potential of the

students

and their future.

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an example: I currently don't work in something related to what I studied, but all the informal contents that the university provided me are

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crucial to me in order to find a good job and perform well in it. In conclusion, from my

view

, what the

universities

need to find is a balance between functional and meaningful

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.

In other words

, colleges should not forget the full picture while they're trying to help

students

to get jobs.