A friend of yours is thinking about appliying for the same course that you did at the university. He/She has asked for your advice about studying this subject. write a letter to your friend. In your letter Give details of the course you took at the university. Expalin why you recommend the university. Give some advice about how to apply.

Dear Anya, I am so sorry we didn't have been touched recently. Life is so hectic. Hope you everything is well, I am writing
this
to reply to your previous letter
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the
subject
inquired. With my two cents, I would like to recommend the "photography"course, I have done
this
subject
since my
first
year at Wollongong University. There are a lot of solid reasons to account for why I think suitable for you.
First
of all,
this
subject
includes three assignments, 2000 words essay, a presentation and final photo work. As I know, you don't like any exams.
Therefore
, I think that would be good for you. What is more, Dr Derek is a great person in the photography field. He is humble, friendly, and professional. Don't forget to advance two weeks online to enrol his course time. I promise you would have a wonderful study experience with
this
subject
. Looking for hearing your reply, we may have a cup of coffee
next
semester. Yours sincerely Ella
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